Written by -M. Taggart
Published- MasticadoresUSA
The Confused Parallel
He couldn’t catch his breath. His words
were spinning in his mind with such ferocity
he was unable to calm himself as he began to
shake. He was sure he could see his words
on the ceiling. He pulled his body together,
clamped his knees to his chest, and rocked
while trying to make as little noise as possible.
She was asleep next to him. Her beautiful black
hair lay along the side of her face, nestled softly
onto her pillow, splashing a blackness so peaceful,
just around her head as a halo might linger for
a moment longer when the harboring light is willing
to have it. This light was not for him.
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Please visit the link below to read the full poem. ‘See’ you there!
Thanks everyone, and of course- Thank you, Gabriela!
Matt
Excellent poem Matt. It was a pleasure to publish it.
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Thank you for taking time to get to know it π
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Ooh, I guess I should have anticipated that very last sentence based on the title, but It caught me off guard still, lol. Nice wrap up!
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Thank you!! So glad to know that the end was something of impact for you π
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When I read it’s always with much anticipation (unlike watching a movie) because it’s difficult to predict the direction of the author, but I play this lil game where I think I know & I love when I’m shocked, lol.
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Utterly fantastic, you wove such a concise web, that I felt like I was there
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Thank you. This style writing isnβt always easy for some people to read, so I really appreciate that.
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It was done superbly
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Iβll let you in on a little secret. This poem was part of six poems that I wrote as a small series. Two of those poems were picked up by a publication and published in a hardcopy book.
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β€οΈππΌthank you
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Great end
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Hi Beth β€οΈπ
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Incredible! So well written!
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Thank you! I hope your day is treating you well π
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Your writing is expressive and also elusive. I like how you say a lot without totally laying it out there. A good one, Matt. Congratulations! π
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Thank you, Terveen πππΌ
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