11 thoughts on “Free To Be – A Poem

  1. So short and simple and profound – reminds me i need to get back to my Micropoetry writing that i started this year – https://brettfish.wordpress.com/2015/07/14/micropoetry-2015

    But this is great – i wonder rhythmwise if you remove the word ‘free’ what you think? Cos when you say it out the last line has that one extra beat – wordwise it is great but i also love the ‘understood’ nature of if it was just ‘we have this day to be’ while keeping free in the title… just a thought that came to me as i read it but i love the first two lines in particular – that sense of holding someone back from a potential tragedy

    Nice one
    love brett fish


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